Random Instance Of Thought

I dropped a rhyme | Once upon a time,

Back in the day | Back in my prime,

I dropped a rhyme in a style lyrical,

The delivery with a precision kinda surgical,

But that was back then,

When,

No one gave a shit about mice and men,

When,

My mind wandered about on a solitary plane,

When,

I pandered about on the brink of falling insane,

Then,

And then I broke the wall,

That which stood between you and I,

I called you boo,

You called me sweetypie,

But…

…Again,

That was then.

9 Comments

  1. Bubu June 9, 2008 at 1:07 pm

    I wonder what inspired you to write this.

  2. 31337 June 9, 2008 at 7:32 pm

    is this is an unfinished post?
    did it escape from captivity?
    what was on the author’s mind when he was penning it?
    what am i thinking?

  3. Mr. Back2Basics... June 10, 2008 at 6:12 am

    Ni99a you have skillz…
    Ok, that’s just me appreciating skillz

  4. antipop June 10, 2008 at 7:16 am

    sad nicely written er poem.

  5. kats June 10, 2008 at 2:05 pm

    another sad love song…? where do you get these things?
    But I gotta give it to you- you’ve got your kalamashaks going

  6. kakaire June 11, 2008 at 3:39 am

    Lyrical G gots nothing on ya.

  7. Lesi June 19, 2008 at 12:16 pm

    Question that begs to be asked … what has happened since then?

  8. Ivan June 19, 2008 at 12:25 pm

    @ Tandra; Why yes, so it is.
    @ Bubu; uh, weed?
    @31337; yes.
    @B2B; Thank you thank you thank you, you’re far too kind
    @Antipop; Er, thanks
    @Kats; From deep within
    @Kakaire; Lyrical who? ;o)
    @Lesi; A L O T :o)

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